Live Beta Wrestling

see it here

Live Nude Beta Wrestling!

After the GATF discussion/thread/war on alt.startrek.creative, I offered to post a raw story and have Doctor Science beta it in public. Here we are:

"The Rod," original

"The Rod," First Draft

first set of beta comments & responses

"The Rod," Second Draft

Second set of beta comments & responses

"The Rod," Third Draft

"The Rod," Fourth Draft

"The Rod," Fifth Draft

"The Rod," Final Story-Pending

Captain James T. Kirk

This is an experiment in editing an original fanfic story on the web.

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